I am doing my final copy of my thesis and running out of time. I am just correcting a few little things my adviser suggests. I have a problem or two.
On the first page of the first chapter which is supposed to be a intro he has two comments. He wants to know why the thesis isn't clearly stated and why I didn't layout the chapters.
Do you need to state your thesis very explicitly? If so does it need to be in the first couple paragraphs or could it come at the end of the intro where I've already at least intro'd the subject matter.
I don't know where or how to put in the layout of chapters. If I put it at the very beginning of the intro it will be about things I haven't explained. If i put it at the end it feels like an afterthought.
The tough part of both of these things is attempting to avoid "I, Me, Mine" in my statements. I can't think of how to put these things in without doing this.
Any help?
On the first page of the first chapter which is supposed to be a intro he has two comments. He wants to know why the thesis isn't clearly stated and why I didn't layout the chapters.
Do you need to state your thesis very explicitly? If so does it need to be in the first couple paragraphs or could it come at the end of the intro where I've already at least intro'd the subject matter.
I don't know where or how to put in the layout of chapters. If I put it at the very beginning of the intro it will be about things I haven't explained. If i put it at the end it feels like an afterthought.
The tough part of both of these things is attempting to avoid "I, Me, Mine" in my statements. I can't think of how to put these things in without doing this.
Any help?