it was not edited very crisply. there were some continuity issues, things that were known that had not yet been introduced, etc. i would have to read it again to be more specific. i am sure it satisfied its target demographic. i guess there was at least one more, not sure, cant find it at borders and another in developement. there has also been talk about a movie franchise. i would probably tighten up the movie a little, make the kids a little older maybe regular cast members so i could eliminate the school, playground, parents, and other outside the park stuff. a couple of the guys might share an apartment. with older kids you could let in the "Twilight" type of romance that all the girls like........................... i do go on dont i........................................
